2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(24):交通安全

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What,s Wrong With Them Take a look at the road conditions of today,according to the four picture,we can know the road condition is bad,let me see the first picture show the bike accross car way.second picture show pedestrian didnt wolk in zebra crossing.the third picture show pedestrian come over the divider.finally picture show the car move out the road.all of them are dangerous.so we can do it,you should stop them when you see someone do. Wish everyone safe in life.