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Next semester,the students' Union of my university wishes to hold an arts festival,which aims to enrich students' campus life.As an important event,there are lots of tasks which must be done.I would like to give some suggestions and ideas contributing to the completion of the arts festival. First and foremost,I think that it is indespensible for planners to make some relevant questionnaires to acquire students' preference.For example,the questionnaire can include styles and types of programs,surveying that students' favorite terms.Only in this way can the arts festival win popularity among students. Second,I'm totally convinced that creation and innovation can make the festival more interesting and gorgeous.As is known to all,similar festivals like this one have been held for years in school.Therefore,students may be tired of the same forms and procedures.And it is the key point to reform and get some ingenious changes.With the brilliance of creation,the arts festival will make a hit. Last but not least,holding the name of arts,the arts festival must show students all kinds of art activities.Planners can organize various wonderful performance around this theme,bring an impressive stage to students. All in all,in order to make the arts festival successful,planners should spare no effort to prepare for it.And besides all the suggestions I have been mentioned above,it is also essential for planners to contribute their enthusiasm and responsibility.
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