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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是学术词汇使用较恰当;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As we all know, it's unwise to judge a person only by their appearance. As far as I'm concerned, the conclusion from the judgement in this way is apparently not so logical that more potential risk and danger are waiting for us. These reasons why I firmly insist on the point view lie in the following three aspects. To begin with, in most occasions, what we see by our own eyes always cheat us in such a secret that we can be aware of. In addition, even if what we've seen is true for that moment, we are not capable of assuring that it would not change. The last but not least, the only key to recognize someone is the time. In other words, how much time we spend together to have a great acknowledge about the person? In order to judge a person in an appropriate way, we need devote more time to knowing a person from the appearance to the heart inside. Only in this can we do really know a person far form their appearance.

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