作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
The argument over whether we do good deeds for a reward is heated. Some argue strongly that great deeds deserve recognition .In this selfish world, it is vitally important to recognize and promote various noble deeds. Rewarding and encouraging good deeds helps set an inspiring example to the public. The opposing view is that we should perform good deeds without expectations of any rewards. People shouldn’t do good deeds with other immaterial motives. We should do something good for others like Lei Feng without expectations of any return. From my perspective, doing good deeds in exchange for rewards isn't an offense. In fact,receiving public praise and attention make a contribution to the widespread promotion of good values. A role model sometimes play an important role in good deed.