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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Most of us are very careful to spend our money on the daily consumption. For example we spend a lot of time to make the decision even we are just to buy a pack of tissue. it may just save 3 or 4 RMB. So people are careful to spend our money for the daily consumption especial for the one who is rely on the salary. For myself. i am the one who is live rely on the salary . that means i don't have any other incomes expect the salary. so i am very careful to spend the money on my daily life. i will not spend money if i have to . i ate at School cafe meals 3 times a day to save the cost of cooking for myself in about 50RMB a day at least. the income is not easy to earn for most of us who is an employee instead of employer. so we earn money by spending our time and effort very reguarly. we are more cheish the money that we have earned. people do cherish things that come uneasy. that is the people's nature quality. so we are careful about what we're going to spend according to the nature law for human beings. for most of the chinese , we have a traditional virture that do not waste . we usually spend money very carefully. According to the oberservation of mine . I do beielive that everybody are careful about the money how was be dealed with . So i could say that everybody are careful about the daily consumption. that is what i have shared with you. My fellow.
