2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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Every people want to success in his life. For example, the pupil wants to get high score in the exam, the business man wants to earn lot of money, the politician wants to ecolomic boom, the employee wants to big boost on salary, and so on. However, we must understand the relationship between the success and work hard. In other words, you should be diligent and dedicated, focus your energy on one thing, then you will make success. That is proved to the right way to sucess, and there is no shortcut to the success. there are ample example to indicate that. For example, the students can only get the offer to university by learning hard, the teacher can only get the publication of book by reading a lots of references and doing experiments. But some person do not agree with this, they always think that there are several ways to make success, work hard will make money, but this way is too slowly to make success. That is not right absolutedly. In a conclusion, if there is a shortcut to success, that must be work hard.