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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, with the advancement of economy and society, money plays a vital prat in our daily life.Most of people tend to buy clothes when they are in the sale and choose a variety of ways to save money. Taking all the favorable and unfavorable aspectsinto account, I stand on the side that people should not choose those ways. There is no denying the fact that money would be used for many things in our common life.For example, we need to buy clothes ,foods houses and so on.I believe that businessman should not make their proof lose so it was not realized.On the contrary,sometimes if you do not buy something until it was become cheap,sometimes you could be chented.Besides,sometimes you could buy an old thing but the money would not decline. For my part, everyone should save money for a rainy day,However, you 'd better buy something in time. I maintain that if you would not buy something by a mad way ,you will never become a poor man.
