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新东方托福高分作文:自学还是跟老师学?

发布时间:2013-07-17 16:34浏览次数:550
要求:
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the rapidly developing society which provides more various equippments for personal life and public affairs,it is commomly accepted that education is no longer limited in classroom and defined by traditional methodology.So,as a result of cutting-edge techniques,students are no longer restricted in the way that they must learn from teachers.Some students would like to study by themselves,by watching long-distance courses,or by just reading textbooks,but other students still want to absorb knowledge from approachable teachers.As for my own option,I do want to continue my education under teachers' instruction and supervision.And I can enumerate at least three benefits from this advantageous situation. First of all,through learning with teachers,we cannot only learn how to assimilate new ken and practical skills,but also significant stratagem about interpersonal ability which is increasingly influential in individual development.Obviously,in the stage of adolescence where our mind is not mature and our observation towards society is not perspicacious,we must keep contact with those who have sufficient experience,i.e.teachers in most cases.Therefore,teachers can teach the social skills and we can promote our interpersonal skills by interacting with teachers,which is the crucial advantage of learning with teachers. Furthermore,teachers are truly the beacon light leading towards the brilliant direction.Even though students have much hatred for traditional schooling which perhaps puts too much stress upon them,it is unquestionable that teachers can proficiently outline the structure of what is printed in textbooks and analyze what is the most essential part.Thus,students can be more effective to imbue knowledge. Finally,in almost every school and university,teachers' function is not simplistically teaching,but many other conducive influence.For instance,if we confront questions which cannot be solved by ourselves,teachers are actually the optimal choice to assist us.In addition,we can develop friendship with teachers whose characteristics are really attractive and ability is enviable,so that we keep contact after graduation.And they will continue to help us,thus making the future more refulgent. In conclusion,I do think that learning with teachers has numerous advantages.Therefore,it is the best choice.

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