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there is a big debate about the relationship between human and enrvironment. on the one hand , some peolple hold that human activities have bring about many problems for the plants and animals. the environment can not come back to the past level although people would like to do somethings for the environment. firstly, withe the rapid urbanization, more and more lands were used to build houses for the citizens.so these lands can not reuse as the farm land again. furthermore, a great amounts of trees are cutted down in order to match the need of paper and furnitures. sa a result, a wide range of special plants and animals are in danger because of the sharpen decease of trees. on the other hand, some people have opitismic attitude towards protecting environment. they think some measures can be taken . to begin with, both the government and society pay more attention on the sustainable development. so protecting the environment is as important as protecting our homes. although urbanization is the trend, govenment plan the city with high density in order to satisfy the increasing housing needs. in addition, recycling has been become a habit for everyone. a wide range of rubbishes have been reused. in conclusion, we should face the truth that our environment has been polluted,but if some measures have been taken we can save our earth and have a friendly relationship between the earth and human.
