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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:51浏览次数:6332
要求:
题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分22.0分
评语:

文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段。

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The Dragon Boat Festival is a very important traditional festival in china. It's a time for us to memorize the poetry Quyuan whose behavior. At Dragon Boat Festival we uaually have nothing to do but to go grandmother's home to reunion for us. It is a time for us to renion and no special meaning. We all like festivals in china.

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