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The Dragon Boat Festival is a very important traditional festival in china. It's a time for us to memorize the poetry Quyuan whose behavior. At Dragon Boat Festival we uaually have nothing to do but to go grandmother's home to reunion for us. It is a time for us to renion and no special meaning. We all like festivals in china.