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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇基础不错，但学术词汇量还要多多积累；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
This is the best class I have ever taken, it was teaching by Bob. I was surprise that every body was screaming as soon as he walked into the room. This class was talking about imagenation. What would you do if something happened. I wanted to make a setence which is, what would you do if the earth could not live no longer. But at that moment I had no idea to make it. To interested thing was most of students I know. esacially News, I haven't seen her for a while. We had perfect ending in this class. after that, I quickly to remove the borad because Bob always writes a lots thing on it. I think it is good way to be friendly with forigners. I didn't expect someone that would praise. Maybe it didn't work, actually, I love to help people when they are too busy to do something. As it happened, there had a making dumpling party tonight. So it was a change to get some scores. what is the point? You will be freely to take classes one month if you gather 600 scores from some acitivies. At the first, everybody was excited to talk about that, but it not only watse time to get it, but hard to follow every activities. So we gave up! In the end, there was impressied thing was Ashaly told me you would succeed if you insist on something such as learning English. And thanks Georgia paised me to someone. And I should change my style to get to know more people, because not everyone receive your joke as a joke.
