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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中学术词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
This is the best class I have ever taken, it was teaching by Bob. I was surprise that every body was screaming as soon as he walked into the room. This class was talking about imagination. What would you do if something happened. I wanted to make a sentence which is, what would you do if the earth could not live no longer. But at that moment I didn't have any idea to make it. More interested thing was most of students I knew, esecially News, I haven't seen her for a while. We had a great time during the class. after that, I quickly to move the borad because Bob always writes a lots thing on it and it is hard to do it after signing . I think it is good way to be friendly with foreigners. I didn't expect someone that would praise. Maybe it didn't work, actually, I love to help people when they are too busy to do something. As it happened, there had a making dumpling party tonight. So it was a change to get some scores. What is the point? You will be freely to take classes one month if you gather 600 scores from some actitivies. At the first, everybody was excited to talk about that, but it not only waste time to get it, but hard to follow every activities. So we gave up! In the end, there was impressed thing was Ashaly told me you would succeed if you insist on something such as learning English. And thanks Georgia paised me to someone. And I should change my style to get to know more people, because not everyone receive the joke as a joke.
