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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中学术词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
This is the best class I have ever taken, it was teaching by Bob. I was surprise that every body was screaming as soon as he walked into the room. This class was talking about imagination. What would you do if something happened. I wanted to make a sentence which is, what would you do if the earth could not live no longer. But at that moment I didn't have any idea to make it. The more interested thing was most of students I knew, especially News, I haven't seen her for a while. We had a great time during the class. After that, I quickly to clean the blackborad because Bob always writes a lots sentences on it and it is hard to do it after signing. I think it is good way to be friendly with foreigners. I didn't expect someone that would praise me. Maybe it didn't work, actually, I love to help people when they are too busy to do something. As it happened, there had a making dumpling party tonight. So it was a change to get some scores. What is the point? You will be freely to take classes one month if you gather 600 scores from some activites. At the first, everybody was excited to talk about that, but it not only waste time to get it, but hard to follow every activities. So we gave up! In the end, there was impressed was Ashaly told me you would be proud yourself if you insist on something such as learning English. And thanks Georgia praised me to someone. And I should change my style to get to know more people which always quick to have a dig at someone.
