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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6008
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分54.0分
评语:

文中从句数量过少;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

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In my opinion, our school is clean and tidy. First of all,there's a playground in our school. We always play basketball, football, badminton and so on in it. Our class teacher is Mrs. Zhao, she is king and dear, she is our Chinese tescher. In addition, she is paitient to us. But if we don't pay attantion on her, she will tell your parents. I like our English teacher best. She is Mrs. Tang, she can be our friend after school, she can also teaches us many necessary things. Like what I said above, this is our school

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