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In my opinion, our school is clean and tidy. First of all,there's a playground in our school. We always play basketball, football, badminton and so on in it. Our class teacher is Mrs. Zhao, she is king and dear, she is our Chinese tescher. In addition, she is paitient to us. But if we don't pay attantion on her, she will tell your parents. I like our English teacher best. She is Mrs. Tang, she can be our friend after school, she can also teaches us many necessary things. Like what I said above, this is our school