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请作者增加学术词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
This is the best class I have ever taken, it was teaching by Bob. I was surprise that every body was screaming as soon as he walked into the room. This class was talking about imagination. What would you do if something happened. I wanted to make a sentence which is, what would you do if the earth could not live no longer. But at that moment I didn't have any idea to make it. Very interested, most of students I knew in the room, especially News, I haven't seen her for a while. We had a great time during the class. After that, I quickly to clean the blackboard because Bob always writes a lots sentences on it and it is hard to do it after signing. I think it is good way to be friendly with foreigners. I didn't expect someone praise me. Maybe it didn't work, actually, I love to help people when they are too busy to do something. As it happened, there had a dumpling party tonight. So it was a change to get some scores. What is the point? You will be freely to take classes one month if you gather 600 scores from some activities. At the first, everybody was excited to talk about that, but it not only waste time to get it, but hard to follow every activities. So we gave up! It was impressed that Ashaly told me that you would be proud of yourself if you insisted in learning English. And thanks Georgia praised me to someone. And I should change my style to get to know more people which always quick to have a dig at someone.
