2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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China is a biggest countries one of the world.There are many beautiful sence in some places. For instance, Beijing Gugong and Tian an squre,Hangzhou west lake and so on. Expecially in my hometown fuzhou , Fuzhou is not a big city ,but it is very beautiful and interesting . The most intereting thing is summer which can pick strawberries . In my hometown , someplaces we can pick the organic strawberries byself, it will make us enjoyable and relax a lot. In a word, if you come ,you will feel the fun.