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作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the rapidly developing society which provides more various possibilities for commercial companies to conduct business,businessmen are confronting more choices about how to expand their influence and at the same time how to make contribution for citizenry.Subsequently,a company will give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment.In my opinion,if the company has the desire to implement charitable affairs,it had better invest into the protection of environment which has been polluted or is going to be contaminated by industrial process.And the policy will incur several benefits for the company itself,the citizenry and the nature protection. Firstly,for the perspective of economy,by dedicating itself into environmental protection,the company can enlarge its social effect and then bring advantages for the business.For one thing,through protecting environment and assisting the related organizations whose purport is to optimize the earth,the company can establish a perfect impression and enhance its prestige.Thus,the kind of stratagem will create more effective public influence than commercial advertisements can do.In addition,as some researches report,where the environment become better,the company can achieve higher profits.Because the company does not need to waste financial resources to combat with pollution. Secondly,that the company which has extensive social effect will take action to protect environment,will promote the public awareness of harmonizing the relation between the human being and the planet which is only available planet by now.For instance,the famous company will at least lead its employees and their family to strengthen the awareness of symbiosis among the globe.Therefore,the action will spread beyond the community and function in more immense spectrum. Finally,personally thinking,the environment is more significant that purly aesthetic entertainment.Granted,arts including music,painting and sculptures,etc.,are also essential in the long river of human civilization.However,social resposibility is more meaningful for a company which has the ambition to make dedication.Moreover,currently,the environment issues,such as the global warming,the chemical pollution and the deforestation,are vehemently discussed because the planet is experiencing unprecedented crisis that it never experienced before. In conclusion,the protection of environment is a gradual and formative process which needs untold tiny actions and comprehensive collaboration among everyone in the society.Undoubtedly,it is the common actions that make us,both the human and the planet,brighter and more spectacular in the future.
