2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中学术词汇的使用需加强，另外要注意词汇拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Currently, people's living standard become increasingly great. Most people tend to buy private cars for convience.In order to solve this problem, government decide to collect pollution tax.This caused sharp arguement. Taking all the favorable and unfavorable aspects into account, I stand on the side that people should observe this decision. To begin with, with more and more cars are used in people's daily life, the pollution also become very serious.As a memmber of the earth country, every of us shuold possess the responsibility to protavt our home.Besides, collecting pollution tax can remind people protect our enviroment.Along with the advancement of society,more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is that enviroment protecting .This measurement can help to solve many difficulties.From the past to now ,many things have changed so people's thoughts need to change, too. For me,everything is suggested to protect our home should be supported.It is quite understandable that on enviroment vary from person to person.However, I hope and I believe everyone has a correct view in their minds.Our home would become more and more beautiful.