若注意文中一些句法错误,文章会更不错;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
everyone have eyes and ears, but not everybody know listening is false, seeing is true. nowadays, internet develop fast, media around our life, there are a variety of information showed in the TV or internet, we offen think they are truth without calm. firstly, news may not a real news, social media communication is powerful, it can easily change our mind, to appreciate or critical one person or thing, it have big effect to the party. secondly, when we are not calm, we always think ourself is correct, but some time later we regret and feel sorry, it's have no use. thirdly, smart people have know something, they will use there brain to judge the information is truth or not, and they won't say any decision randomly. as a noemal person, we are easy to change or build our oppoin acrodding to the news, and perform our emotion easily, for one things, our attitude often follow others, even depend on others, this time, we usually have no thought then make a decision dirctly, consequently, the decision is not right in many times.
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