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2001年专四作文真题:Travel broadens the mind

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:18浏览次数:5783
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Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come toknow the significance of travel through our own experience.
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Travel Broadens the Mind
You are to write in threeparts: 
In the first part, state clearlywhat your view is.
In the second part, support yourview with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what youhave written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded forcontent, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow theinstructions may result in a loss of marks.
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;请注意分段。

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As far as i'm concerned,i think that travel can broaden the mind and the horizen.Besides,it helps us improve health. Why do i think so?When we go out for traveling,we can meet different people,and i can make friends with them.In addition,when we go to a strange place,we can learn more about some local customs.We can put our jobs aside when we take a trip,so we will feel relaxed and be healthier.

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