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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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I have been homesick almost the whole year. I have to work everyday and study at night, after that, I always return home around 10 p.m. Then I cook on my own, take a shower, review the knowleage which I learned today. Sometimes I am too tired to do it that to complain about this cruel world. But it doesn't work. After crying, I will study again. That is normal daily life in these years. Sometimes I haven't got enough money so that have to borrow from my classmates. Sometimes I am bullied by my co-worker, Sometime I am too angry that I almost want to quite my job. But I get it, it is not bad luck, however it is the way to push me to do the right things and temper myself. I didn't know how many times I have ever cried, just realized I have grown up after crying.
