Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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I have been homesick almost the whole year. I have to work everyday and study at night, after that, I always return home around 10, Then I cook it on my own, take a shower, revise which I learned today. Sometimes I am too tired to do it that to complain about this cruel world. But it doesn't work. After crying, I will study again. That is normal daily life in these years. Sometimes I haven't got enough money so that have to borrow from my classmates. Sometimes I am bullied by my co-worker, Sometime I am too angry that I almost want to quite my job. But I get it, it is not bad luck, however it is the way to push me to do the right things and temper myself. This is style of life on my twenties, although it's sucks, I love it. Not only have a experience to do stupid things, but I can catch my dreams in luxurious living. I didn't know how many times I have ever cried, just realized I have grown up after crying.