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I’m glad to hear that we will have an Arts Festival next year because I like arts and hope more arts activities can be held in our school. As far as I am concerned, cause we want students as many as possible to attend this activity. I think the most important thing for this Arts Festival is publicity. Now I will share two suggestions for that. Firstly, a well advertisement means a good starting. But before we launch the advertisement, we should make a clearly theme for this activity. Then we need look for people to design beautiful posters and spread it. In this part, the poster’s style must be interesting and match the theme of the festival so that the activity can impress people. Secondly, we can make the festival more tridimensional for students. We can design some small games before the big day. For example, we can design an ask-answer game on the internet. People answer the question (which has something to do with the activity) correctly may gain the gift. It can make more students to pay attention to the activity. It also can attract people outside of school pay attention to the festival. I think we can make our festival better if we pay attention to the advertisement and design creativity activities.
