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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays, with the development of economyand the advancement of people's living standard ,traveling is becoming increasingly popularity among us.Meanwhile, the fourishment of tourism bring many enviroment problems. Personly, many tourists do not notice protact envrionment, this make the environment more and more serious. There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon. One is because people lack in the concept of protecting environment.After visiting a spot ,there will be much rubbish .Nevertheless, it is risky if people are blind to the damage of this issue.Foe example, the Tian'an men Square is very crowed at holiday times. At all scenic spots tourists have to ling up and take it in turns to take photos.While,after celebrating,much litter would be seen on the square here and there. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.However, everyone should protect the environment whatever views they have.
