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Nowadays, people in mounting numbers use the internet for study, communication, amusement and so forth.Some hold the positive view that the internet can literally facilitate student's daily life while others, who worry it may affect student's study, are against it.From my perspective, advantages of internet far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in contemporary society. The reason why I support it can be listed as follows.First, students can browse the internet and collect diverse information which they can't get in class, which greatly enriches their extracurricular knowledge. Moreover, internet resembles an enormous worldwide spider web where we can talk about everything with friends around the world, which bridges the gap between them.Last but not least, compared with real world, an online virtual world can provide an occasion where those who dare not to interact with others face to face spout off what they want to express. Despite the internet is also a sword with two edges which always bring about lots of troubles for us. I firmly believe it could promote our lives if we use it reasonably.