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2008年12月英语四级作文真题:一次性塑料袋

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:15浏览次数:2649
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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags   
1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用   
2. 造成的问题   
3. 限制使用塑的意义
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Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags Since it's 21th century,we have been using large numbers of the disposal bags.Though it's convenient,it has caused many problems. First of all,the disposal bags can't be reused,and it costs 0.1 yuan for one,if every one of us has one disposal bag every single day,then we would pay it for 3 yuan for a month,and 36 yuan for one year.there's a population of 13 billion in China,and we will pay the disposal bags for 468 billion yuan annually at least.How exepensive it is!Isn't it? Secondly,it's not easy to destroy the disposal bags,and it's bad for soil.We won't get harvest if we plant crops in the poor soil. In a word,the disposal bags may do more harm than good,we should limit the use of disposal bags,so that we can reduce the waste of resource and avoid the issues that the disposal bags causes.

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