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Dear, These is subway entrance B on the second Avenue, next to the subway entrance is a large clothing Plaza, and there has a great umber of people shopping everyday. After passing it, you go straight on it till seeing the traffic light and turn left, it just costs 53 mins to get there. Perhaps you will see a McDonald's. It's directly cross from the Plaza. After that, you have to pass the Zebra crossing to The Muslim restaurant again. If you lost the way, Don't worry, there is police station beside the McDonald's and ask for help. If you get it, then go straight pass the Dong fang Hotel where is close to the Muslim restaurant, there is small path nearby the Hotel. If you are tired you can have a rest at park, you will be surprise that has kinds of facilities such as Ferris wheel. This is your favorite ride, isn't it? Or you can call me to have a cup of coffee. Because my house is just close to it.
