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As the development of life standard,shopping online has became a most popular.It also plays an important role in our daily life ,for it benefits and be convenient us.I think there are some reasons as follow. Above all,we can buy everything that we need without leaving at home.It not only saves much time,but gets a good price as well.Secondly,shopping online can relieve crownd on holidays,as we know ,people like to go shopping with friends or families on their holidays.When they spent much time on paying, it will affect thier shopping feeling. However,everything has its advantages and disadvantages.we may quarrel with sellers for the quality problem.What's more,the goods online sometimes are quite different from what we saw,and then it will causes lots of troubles. In my opinion ,i think we should take some measures to solve it .For exmple,the seller should be honesty for the buyer.also setting up some regulations ,if the sellers lose their promises,they will be punished.Only by this way ,can we be more convenient shopping online.It benefits both the sellers and the buyers.
