2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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This is the first snow day in this year, when I saw the snowflakes dancing in the gloomy sky, I feel [时态不一致]happy suddenly. The long boring holiday will go on in a planned way, I will use this period to become mature. Today my mother lose her temper again, and I am familiar with this kind of scene. In the past, I usually argued with her and I always wanted to prove that she was wrong and was too critical to be impartial. While now, I can calm down and listen to her words and try to find the right thing that I can learn from it, especially that moment when I saw the snow on her hair, she looked older than she is[感觉怪怪的] and the thought that I had done the wrong things to her and my father came into my mind. As my mother usually says [Says or saying？？]that I am already over 20 years old, it is the age that can be a wife, a mother, a worker, unfortunately, I just look childish. They are getting older and weaker day by day, as their child who drink their blood and eat their [them]to some extent, I must move forward to pay for their effort.