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Some people regard as reading selectively,because think some are not useful.For example,some books including unhealthy konwledge,such as teach people how to reduce weight,play games, make friends and so on,it's easy to teach us badly.Meanwhile,some people are agree with reading extensively.the reason why is that they think read books can give ue a large amount of knowledge.It's very important for us to how to learn live and get along with people. In my opinion,I think we should combine reading selectively with reading extensively.and read lots of books of the healthy and actively.What's more,we should apply these theories into practice.As the saying goes:live and learn