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3月22日
参加人员
全校师生
要求：
1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，课适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 文章长度；约100词（不包含已给的词数）。
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day.
Yours,
Liu Hong
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。
Dear Jim, Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day. On March 22nd all the teachers and students of the school take part in different activities. Lots of students put on short plays. Some plays are funny, and they show us wasting water is bad for humans. Many students take part in the speech competition. They tell us what we should do to save water. Some teachers and students make posters and put them up in the school and neihborhood. In this way, more people know the World Water Day and join us. When this people know the importance of water,they will take more action to protect the water.
