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1. 词数：80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
采用了一些简单的从句；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
December7th,FridayFine On my way home on the bus,I saw a grandfather take his grandson of ten old kid to bus,the old men handed bag and pioan.I let the old men seat ,but the grangson sited down.the old men standed beside.the kid croud loudly and asked to drink,put empty bottle on the bus.I think the child must take of old men and keep the bus clean.
