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December7th,FridayFine On my way home on the bus,I saw a grandfather take his grandson of ten old kid to the bus,the old men handed bag and poona.I let the old men seat ,but the grandson sited down.the old men standed beside.the kid crowd loudly and asked to drink,put empty bottle on the ground.I think the child have to take care of old men and keep the bus clean.
