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1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总词数。3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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December7th,FridayFine On my way home on the bus,I saw a grandfather went to the bus with his grandson.the grandfather took a bag and a poona.I let the old men seat ,but the grandson sited down.the old men standed beside.the kid crowd loudly and asked to drink,put empty bottle on the ground.I think the child have to take care of old men and keep the bus clean.