要求:
1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总词数。3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,另外请重视拼写检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
December7th,FridayFine On my way home on the bus,I saw a grandfather and his grandson buy the bus.The grandfather took a bag and a poona.I let the old men seat,but the grandson sited down.the old men standed beside.the kid crowd loudly and asked to drink,put empty bottle on the ground.I think the child have to take care of old men and keep the bus clean.