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Nowadays, the digital production in growing number make us get the digital age. There are great effects on both our work and our life. A coin have two sides, these effects have their advantage and their disadvantage. For example, more and more e-books which are about all kinds of sides are on sale in the market.The e-books are cheaper and more convenient than the traditional paper books, which really get the young like. However, it may arouse the anxiety among some persons who worry about that the e-books will replace to the tradition paper books. Besides, with the Internet,more and more youngers like to search the answers and measures when they have problems instead of thinking or finding the answers. More and more persons can not live without the digital production. From my perspective, we should accept the new productions ,but at the same time, we also catch up with the digital age.