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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19728
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
评语:

句式变化较为丰富,但需注意文中个别句子错误;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

it is well know that commpetition exists in every corner of the society and plays an important role in both our life and work.it tell us if we with friends in cooperation,we will solve the problems soomthly and lead a hppier life. in the meanwhile,cooperation is also necessary because most work is accomplished wi our thought other people,without which society cannot keep going smoothly. from what has been discussed above.i may safely draw a conclusion that cooperation is esstial to sucess and thus should be emphasized at the same time.everyone should bear it in mind that individuals hard work and team work are eually important

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