字数:200满分:100分
句式变化较为丰富,但需注意文中个别句子错误;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
it is well know that commpetition exists in every corner of the society and plays an important role in both our life and work.it tell us if we with friends in cooperation,we will solve the problems soomthly and lead a hppier life. in the meanwhile,cooperation is also necessary because most work is accomplished wi our thought other people,without which society cannot keep going smoothly. from what has been discussed above.i may safely draw a conclusion that cooperation is esstial to sucess and thus should be emphasized at the same time.everyone should bear it in mind that individuals hard work and team work are eually important