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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
As we know, Chinese government has been spending much,exactly too much on public tranpotations.And as a result,the numbers of GDP are shown well and are welcome.But everybody can figure that it's enough.the public transpotations for Chinese are far enough,even for spring festival.Besides,high speed railway have been built, and many others are under way.But it is common to see nearly of the seats are empty.It is just a waste of energy,the fund are misused.We should pay more for the highways and roads,which are definitely needed,especially in the north-west of China. It is known to all that transpotation is the decisive factor of economy development,without which improving living conditions is no more than a daydream.What do we have to do in the first place? To serve much better for the rich,to improve the mid-class? Or to help more get out of poverty? Yes, we must be clear that we shall help the poor to live a normal life.So building roads to the villages and counties are in great need. We farmers and ordinary people need more roads.
