2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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it is very important for us to realize the human activies to the plants and animal species.in theory, it is nice to argue that plants and animanl specices have a big effects on us.but human excessive the natural resources lead to many rare species have destoryed or damged .only by knowing when we should maintain our moral ground and when we should surrend it can we act in a fashion that promote the greatest possible good .becauce every each person must have the responsibiliries to protect the rare the plants and the animals