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we all know it not a wise to make a conlcusion immediately when you hear or watch something.one of my friend ,ivy,she is a girl like that.i take the same bus with her everyday and we always at the close seat and chat together.she really interested in talking about the things occur in her company,she judge guy by thier first talk with she,once the recation is out of her way,she would delete the guy at once.
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