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There is no doubt that strong will is the most important will of succeed.No one can achieve their dream without their pesistence.If someone coundn't do something by using their strong will,they will get failure more easily and more frequently.Thus a strong will plays an important role in our life. Take the famous writer Shi Tiesheng for example.He got a disease and became disable unfortunately in his youth.Of course he got badly stiken by his unfair fate,however,he faced his fate bravery instead complained it.Because of his strong mind,he never give up to the difficulties and finally successd.Therefore ,we can draw a conclusion that the strong mind can help us more stronger,never give in to the sadness and be faithful to your life. So as for a sthdent,Shi Tiesheng sets up a great example for us.As for the study,it is both happy and sorrow.No matter what the difficulties we are faced,we should continue to do it and never give up.Only done this can we realize our ambition more easily.
