2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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How to deal with the relationship between man and nature . Different people has different opinion. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. They may think that the nature is just like a white paper and the polution is just like the ink which is on the paper, whatever we do, we can not remove the black on the paper. but, I think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Firstly, just such as the