新东方托福高分作文:危险活动的吸引力

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With the rapidly developing society which provides limitless possibilities for people to arrange their personal life and amusement,some citizens,such as retired athletes and other people who have emulous characteristics,are purchasing dangerous sports and hazardous activities.Subsequently,many residents feel nonplused about those actions which perhaps jeopardize the life and the health.In my opinion,I can comprehend those activities from three aspects about why so many people are attracted by dangerous activities. Firstly,from the perspective of biology and psychology,it is the instinctive function of some people that nudges them to taste dangerous savor.Furthermore,as a biological research ever asserted,several special kinds of hormone could play an essential role in the physiological system,including the preferrence to foodstuff,the control of individual motivation and certainly the actions.In addition,everyone will secrete different hormone.Therefore,it is likely for some people to try hazardous activities at full blast. Secondly,in terms of my experience,the involvement in dangerous sports could have relation with the special profession.For instance,some retired athletes who in the past must make efforts to strenthen their body,also are reluctant to abandon their habits even though they have retreated from those professional sports.Moreover,some adolescents must perform extremely extraordinary activities in order to catch eyes.Then they can bring home bacon by spectacular performance and inviting actions.Unquestionably,the kind of incentive is passive and the phenomenon could be just temporary for just several years. Thirdly,some people have practical demand for those dangerous activities.For one thing,because of the increasingly competitive labor market,astronomical managers and employees are experiencing unprecedented stress and frequently confront crisis involving with the personal life and interpersonal connection.Consequently,those adults who feel like a fish banished from the water must find appropriate ways to relieve this desolate condition,one of which are those dangerous sports.Also,some people may want to reinforce their body,to enhance their courage,or to strengthen their fortitude. In conclusion,the affection of dangerous sports has been increasingly faddish and those activities have been pervalent for decades in those developed countries where people have more affluent time and financial ability to bolster those activities,also the eagerness to hearten their spirit.