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7 Days Inn in Yongchuan is the first hotel chains which brand’s one of the most well-known economy hotel in Yongchuan, Chongqing. It marks economy hotel brand enter Yongchuan formally. Making research into the problems and development direction of 7 Days Inn in Yongchuan, We can take some reference about economy hotel brand expand to a small city, Meanwhile, as the chain hotel brand, all the chain hotels share the weal or woe together, do research about 7 Days Inn in Yongchuan not only in favor of their profit and development, but also could improve the reputation and brand influence of 7 Days Inn indirectly. First this paper are discussing and explaining the developments status and related issues of 7 Days Inn in Yongchuan, on the basis of analysis about hotel operations and management issue, based on professional knowledge and learn literature, used surveys and other research methods, combined with local conditions of Yongchuan, making analysis about development status and issues of 7 Days Inn in Yongchuan, getting practical solutions finally, and give comments and suggestions for its future development.