小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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i have a new teacher.she is so good to us .she is beautiful lafd which has big eyes and long black hair and a red mouth.her voice is better .she is good at teaching.when we attend her class,we all felt interesting and happy.she let us know the knowledbge is powerful for humans. she is smart .she likes read books and she often tell us the importance of reading the books .she like the other normal people . in spare time ,she always play games with us .she is also nice .she often help us when we are in trouble.our classmates like her veru much .under her infuuence,i will become the teacher like her.