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Last week our school held a parents' meeting. Parents, students sat together and talked a lot. You Fangtang said she had a lot of problem. The presure of examination confued her sometimes and she was often amused. she even didn't know how to keep the balance of study and entainment as plenty of homework and few time. The teachers told her that it had many ways to relax herself. Firstly, she can spend more time to have a talk with her parents to obtain more understanding. secondly, she can enjoy herself to have a excsurtion to release the presure. Also, she can develop a good hobby, such as a kind of sport, playing an instrument, or even else just release herself without doing anthing. Above all, after this conversation, she at last understand the importance of time. It could make a great progress if the homework had been done in time.