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Last week our school held a parents' meeting. Parents, students sat together and talked a lot. You Fangtang said she had a lot of problems. The pressure of examination confused her sometimes and she was often amused. She even didn't know how to keep the balance of study and entertainment as plenty of homework and few time. The teachers told her that it had many ways to relax. Firstly, she can spend more time to have a talk with her parents to obtain more understandings. Secondly, she can enjoy herself to have a excurtion to release the pressure. Also, she can develop a good habit, such as a kind of sport, playing an instrument, or even else just release herself without doing anything. Above all, after this conversation, she at last understand the importance of time. It could make a great progress if the homework had been done in time.