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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦94:年级家长会

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要求:
上周学校举行了初三年级家长会,家长、学生和老师进行了面对面的交流,尤芳芳代表同学们说出了困惑,表示了决心:
因为经常考试,她时常有些压力,有时感到心烦意乱;
作业多,没有时间…;不知如何平衡学习与玩耍.
老师告诉她放松的方法有很多:⑴多与父母或朋友交流,⑵……
现在她知道了时间的重要性,能按时交作业,已经取得很大的进步;
要求:
1、短文要包括列举的要点并且适当发挥。
2、语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。

3、词数100词以上,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。


Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________

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Last week our school held a parents' meeting. Parents, students sat together and talked a lot. You Fangtang said she had a lot of problems. The pressure of examination confused her sometimes and she was often amused. She even didn't know how to keep the balance of study and entertainment as plenty of homework and few time. The teachers told her that it had many ways to relax. Firstly, she can spend more time to have a talk with her parents to obtain more understandings. Secondly, she can enjoy herself to have a excurtion to release the pressure. Also, she can develop a good habit, such as a kind of sport, playing an instrument, or even else just release herself without doing anything. Above all, after this conversation, she at last understand the importance of time. It could make a great progress if the homework had been done in time.

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