作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
It is not wise to make a instant conclusion once heard or saw something. Bacause conclusions made on bias could lead to misleading or confusing.Here come the reasons. For example,we all come across the experience that we are misleaded by others. How could they produce such kind of mistakes. One key reason is that they do not make out what is happening.
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