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my lovely dog is dudu.it is very strong .it has a big mouth ,two big eyes and not too small noses.he often sleep in its nest/.since it came to my house ,we take care of it with all my heart.it is very kind to us.and it is very smart.when someone knock on the door,it always bracked at it.my dod not only took good care of me,but also was responsabile at home.when strangers camne to my home,he bracked at them but not hurt them .