2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(74):课外活动

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

nowadays tv have become an inseparable part of people ,s lives.it can get the infimation easily and quickly and learn the world quickly,study the knowledge. mant people stary to worry about this increasing dependence on tv.it cause people lose its origical ability to be creative duo to the over reliance on tv.some people believe that the increase in tv infrmation the general literacy rate will ateadily decline.clearly,more and more pople today have difficulty in spelling because of the use of tv. tv is surely playing an increasing significating role in people ,s lives.but too much watch tv could influence the eyesight of the young and a bad influence on their boby .the use of tv must be well balanced with more human interaction